Prance [Remix of Zorg] - Still in Alpha

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Prance [Remix of Zorg] - Still in Alpha

Postby PinkieGuy » 15 Jul 2011 04:27

Hey guys,

I'm currently working on a remix of Zorg's entry into the Remix Contest II and would love some feedback.

http://hizzoner.bandcamp.com/track/pran ... ve-mix-v01

The song is still very much in progress, and whole chunks haven't been written layered or automated. More importantly, some of the vocals need to be re-written as they were original vocoded to fit over a different set of chords. Still input is appreciated.

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Re: Prance [Remix of Zorg] - Still in Alpha

Postby zorg » 20 Jul 2011 21:21

I, of all people, should not comment on it, but i'll try to be constructive only :3

Also, since i suppose you did modify the track already in 6 days, some points could be moot;

My main concern is that the track is missing some "fullness", like a mellower/quieter sound behind the main synth so that it doesn't sound so separated from the drums and the vocals.

The only other thing i'd suggest is giving the hats/cymbals a bit more tail, imho they cut off too fast. Too much reverb could be a problem, but some is not that big a problem (not to mention if you can accomplish this without modifying/adding extra reverb)
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Re: Prance [Remix of Zorg] - Still in Alpha

Postby PinkieGuy » 21 Jul 2011 01:43

Hahaha, I appreciate the feedback Zorg.

I'll see what I can do about filling out that area between the synths and such, possibly a pad (which i always avoid using because i never get them to attack fast enough for my liking.)
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