<Pony><original><wip> An Eye For Detail

[qJesse]

This is my first thread on this site...I signed up no more than 5 minutes ago. Read the rules for this board really quick, and now here we go!



And now I guess there's not much more to say rather than...enjoy? Critique? etcetc? :3

[senntenial]

who are you :3
Anyway, I really love this. You don't even know... Awesome intro, and the synths were great. I like the crescendos and then the oddly timed chord changes which worked so well. Structure was coolio. And it's nice how all of those complexish rhythms were held together by the simple bassline.

[qJesse]

who are you :3
Anyway, I really love this. You don't even know... Awesome intro, and the synths were great. I like the crescendos and then the oddly timed chord changes which worked so well. Structure was coolio. And it's nice how all of those complexish rhythms were held together by the simple bassline.

Thanks a bunch, bro. I still see some things to work on, however. I need to figure out what I can do about putting in a bit more chord progression; this doesn't really go far when melodies are concerned. The synths are actually really simple, as is the overall structure of the track, which is why I want to make it longer and more complex, but I don't know how to yet. I guess it's all in the practice. I think I did pretty well though, considering this is a complete step forward from the electronic genres I've been doing for the past 2 years.

[MasterOfRegret]

I'll just agree with what you said about it. And also, I don't dislike it, I actually think it suits, but the reversed note seems a bit overused imo.

who are you :3

hint hint
Go see the introduction thread here!

[qJesse]

I'll just agree with what you said about it. And also, I don't dislike it, I actually think it suits, but the reversed note seems a bit overused imo.

Heh, I can agree with that, but I had to make some use of the guitar that I barley know how to play. I'm trying to get more into "using what I have", even if that involves having to record it on my poor, 15$ USB headset.

hint hint
Go see the introduction thread here!

And thanks; I was looking for one of those. <3

[Freewave]

Very trippy and atmospheric. I like it, reversed note and all.