<original> <pony> Beneath My Wings (feat. Vafrous Coyote)

[Plaaay]

http://soundcloud.com/plaaay/beneath-my-wings-feat-vafrous-coyote
Featuring the very awesome vocals of Vafrous Coyote!
As always, any feedback is appreciated!

[Solarsail]

I liked the song overall. Vocal melody especially.

0.30 - 0.46, the music doesn't fit the vocals at all, and it's so understated as to sound like he's singing without accompaniment (which, though his voice is not bad, doesn't work)

0.46-0.56 is good.

0.56 - 1.17 (chorus) the electronic part of the sound doesn't fit but the rock part does. It's also, even though it's the chorus, the exact same volume as the rest of the song whereas it should be more energetic (not sure if volume or instrument issue).