Anyway, hi there. A fellow brony directed me here and said i should post this here (that was before he heard the finished version

http://soundcloud.com/gnarrkhaz/gnarrkhaz-youre-going-to-love
First: I'm glad that i actually finished a song for a change. Normally i just write stuff that sounds good but i'm incapable of putting it together in a song.
Second: I don't know about you but i don't like it, not necessarily for the obvious reasons (poorly set up guitar (need a new one) and unclean guitar playing for example). I don't know. It just doesn't sound right. I don't know how else to put it. Of course it's very corny sounding but that was intentional (who knows, maybe i shouldn't have done that?)
I'm already done with a new track (Twilight this time) and i will start recording it shortly. It would be cool if someone could give me feedback so that i can do better next time.