<Industrial>One Two Three Four

[Injustrial]

Decided to make a song about writer's block. Any thoughts on the mix? Is the bass too muddy, the kick too overpowering? Does the vocals come through?

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/one-two-three-four/s-my9IC

[GhostXb]

I find the vocals a bit indistinguishable at points. After my ears adjusted to it it sounded ok, but at first it was just noise. Other then that I find the bass and kick fairly balanced.

[Injustrial]

Thanks for the reply. I've opened up the top end a bit, since it was a bit too lacking there and I think that also helped bring out the vocals more.

[Shad0wMeister]

I agree with Ghost, the rest of the song sounds good but your vocals do get a bit indistinguishable. If you fix that it would sound good to my ears.

[NightmareRare]

I like vocoder vocals, very metal, and the hook when the kids sung 1234. Good stuff man

[Injustrial]

Finished, mastered, up on Youtube