<Pony><Original><Electro House> Unichords

[Lagulas]

This is my second time releasing something by my new pony-artist name "Lagulas". It took almost a week mixing and mastering the track because I didn't really know how to do that kind of stuff when I started so I had to redo everyting in the mixing section. But I think it turned out well, enjoy!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqGIZeqqS-k

[Guthey]

This is decent, imho. The chords were kind of out of place in the beginning, i didn't hear any progression in it, it just sounded like the melody you hear when you are waking up from a nap or something. Also, the beat is way too fast during the first part of the break, and during the second part of the drop where the bass comes in, I'd have to say that using the bass from "sometime" is okay, but you should try and make your own basses, and the part where all there are a bunch of growly sounds right after that "sometime" bass doesn't seem to fit, it just sounds like filler noise. Also, your end break transitions seem a little abrupt. Also, I feel that the chord/lead cuts are a little unnecessary, and a little too frequent during the build and decay.

Again, though, this is decent, so don't take it too hard.

[Lagulas]

@Guthey

I actually made that bass myself so I doesn't really know where you think I have copied it from (link maby? :)
And I know that the bass with the ''filler noise''' sounded strange. The intro had the same chords as the whole song so I don't think they could be out of place.

[Lagulas]

Wait now I know what you are talking about, yea I took that bass o.O but I have heard it in so many songs, he has remade it from someone else I bet too.

[Guthey]

By out of place I just meant that they sound a little strange and that their melody sounds a little obscure.