<Non-Pony><Original><House?> A Loving Lullaby

[The Mad God]

https://soundcloud.com/mad-gods-realm/a-loving-lullaby

This song started as a piano melody I made for someone very special to me, then I turned it into a full song that's somewhat "house-y" for Single Awareness Day.

[Guthey]

The beginning piano melody seems pretty good, but the piano chord sounds like it's a little too intense on the low end.
This doesn't really sound like house at all. I'm not too sure what this is, exactly. Also, I can't tell where this is going, or even went, like, there wasn't any real verse, or chorus in this, it just sounds like you are switching leads every 40 seconds or so. Like, this was nice and all, but I felt like this was pretty much a random song. Again, this was nice, but I couldn't really "feel" anything with this song, like it's missing a rhythm or something; can't really explain though.

[The Mad God]

The beginning piano melody seems pretty good, but the piano chord sounds like it's a little too intense on the low end.
This doesn't really sound like house at all. I'm not too sure what this is, exactly. Also, I can't tell where this is going, or even went, like, there wasn't any real verse, or chorus in this, it just sounds like you are switching leads every 40 seconds or so. Like, this was nice and all, but I felt like this was pretty much a random song. Again, this was nice, but I couldn't really "feel" anything with this song, like it's missing a rhythm or something; can't really explain though.

Yeah, I can see what you mean with the random song bit. I can't really into EDM, so I come as close as I can with the songs where I try to do those genres. I only said house because I pulled out a house loop to use on the song. When it comes to making full songs I kinda fall short.