<Pony><Original/FLP><Ambient/110BPM>- Dreamer/Pulse

[Guthey]

https://soundcloud.com/guthey/dreamer2-0

So This is what I've been working on, I think it's finished. The longest part of this project was pretty much the mixing and mastering. I still think it needs more, but at this point I might be over doing it.

So I was wondering if anyone could possibly give me some feedback on it. I was planning on sending this to EQD for "music of the day," but not if there are still some issues with this, which is basically where you come in. I was wondering if there needs to be any additional mastering, does anything need to be brought down, brought up, taken out, or just structured differently. Since I'm Ambiance isn't exactly my specialty, I'm feeling real skeptical about this. I was also wondering if I could get any feedback on the atmosphere and mood this creates. I was inspired to make this by playing lots of deadspace, and watching some scary movies over the weekend. Anyways, Feedback is much appreciated, also, this is pretty much my first completed track, and is probably what is going to start me off in the YouTube world. I don't expect any fame, but any sort of tips are appreciated.

On another note, here is the free FLP: Here.
You'll also need this: Here. Just go to the "Packs" section and put under the "Vocals" folder.

[PropellerEscape]

I thoroughly enjoyed this, especially the bent, twisted chords you have going on. You've managed to create a dark atmosphere with the little reverbed plucks every now and again, and with the sliding lead. You definitely accomplished what you wanted. I'm not very good at giving ambient feedback (even though I make it myself too) but I think you've got a solid track here! Looking forward to seeing it released :3

[Guthey]

Thank you so much for the feedback, I was staring to wonder about this, but you revived my spirits! A thousand thanks!