<Non-Pony><Jazz> First Song Feedback

[Aedric]

I know this is kinda old and this is my first post, but i haven't actually gotten any feedback on my first song. I was wondering if anyone could make some suggestions? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6mkSO90w0pM
Thanks,
~Aedric

[DatWhackProducer]

try not to use that windows midi type instruments. otherwise please, KEEP DOING THIS SHIT. I AINT HEARD GOOD BRONY FUSION IN A MINUTE DOG.

[Guthey]

If you want feedback, I would suggest that you at least comment or give feedback on someone else's post.

Anyways, This is actually pretty good. A nice groove, the drums were awesome, the bass pluck was good, the ending was great, and the overall rhythm was pretty much spot on. I'd say that this is one of the best jazz pieces I've heard from a brony musician, way to go! One issue I did think is that the ending sort of just ended. I think you should have ended on a higher note on the piano, but, nonetheless, this is still pretty good.