<Non-Pony><WIP><Synthpop>EQAVOX VS Injustrial

[Injustrial]

I've been asked to do some guest vocals for none other than EQAVOX, one of my favorite indie musicians. Let me know how you feel about this, and if I should change something

https://soundcloud.com/injustrial/eqavox-ft-injustrial-dying-sun

This is just the parts where I come in. We're working on making a verse before mine and a proper intro atm

Lyrics:
The time has come to halt creation
Celebrating our damnation
Artificial cell division
The time has come for your decision

Did you believe in what was promised
Did you wish 'pon a speck of stardust
Did you blindly trust in progress
Did you pay the price for excess

Underneath the dying sun
I’ll set the stage on fire for everyone
And in this scene as the stars bleed
We could find ourselves, hidden in-between

The scenery is freeing me and I haven’t got the time
To let the light bounce out of our screens
Where all our dreams reside

This frequency is freeing me and I haven’t got the time
To let the light bounce out of our screens
Where all our dreams reside.

[Guthey]

I have no idea what I should be listening for. I really can't say anything because, to me, this type of music is absolutely demonic, It hurts and scares me deeply. But I think that you sing very well and that you know how to scream. The vocals sound pretty good if that's what you were asking. But I do think it's a little hard to the voice in the beginning, a little too much distortion, or it just sounds a little too artificial. So yeah, that All I really have to say.

[Injustrial]

Thanks for your input. The vocal style I'm going for is very artificial, though.

I would very much like to know if anyone's got any input of amount if backing vocals. Is it too much, not enough? We were thinking of cutting everything beyond the endings, to accentuate the last syllables. Thoughts?