<Non-Pony> <Drumstep> Wub Wub in My Tub Tub (Revamped

[MrMehster]

Hello all, I hope I can get some good feedback on this. This is the first song I've ever done, and I really want to hear what the community has to think. (What to improve on, technical skills, if the beat is catchy enough.)

https://soundcloud.com/yazmilmehster/wub-wub-in-my-tub-tub-revamped

[Guthey]

This is pretty decent for your first song, but I wouldn't constitute it as, more or less drumstep or dnb. Dubstep has slower drums than this. To be honest, though, those are some very generic wub sounds. Try experimenting more with whatever it is you use to make your bass sounds to try and get a more signature sound. The drums were pretty good, so the sidechaining is good. Mixing I would say that you should try and get a little more around the low and middle ends. The bass wasn't very bassy and I feel the lead could have use a little more on the low end. the lead is good, you know how to make a beat, structure seems adequate. you know what you're doing, just try to experiment a little more to try and get out of that generic vibe.

[MrMehster]

This is pretty decent for your first song, but I wouldn't constitute it as, more or less drumstep or dnb. Dubstep has slower drums than this. To be honest, though, those are some very generic wub sounds. Try experimenting more with whatever it is you use to make your bass sounds to try and get a more signature sound. The drums were pretty good, so the sidechaining is good. Mixing I would say that you should try and get a little more around the low and middle ends. The bass wasn't very bassy and I feel the lead could have use a little more on the low end. the lead is good, you know how to make a beat, structure seems adequate. you know what you're doing, just try to experiment a little more to try and get out of that generic vibe.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll think about this when I do more songs! :)

[Guthey]

This is pretty decent for your first song, but I wouldn't constitute it as, more or less drumstep or dnb. Dubstep has slower drums than this. To be honest, though, those are some very generic wub sounds. Try experimenting more with whatever it is you use to make your bass sounds to try and get a more signature sound. The drums were pretty good, so the sidechaining is good. Mixing I would say that you should try and get a little more around the low and middle ends. The bass wasn't very bassy and I feel the lead could have use a little more on the low end. the lead is good, you know how to make a beat, structure seems adequate. you know what you're doing, just try to experiment a little more to try and get out of that generic vibe.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll think about this when I do more songs! :)

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[DJSadEyez]

Nice job, You could fill in the middle part and mix it better though.

And the rise before the drop needs a bit work, too. I'd love this track so hard if you would fix that :)

Problem is, a song should be build up like this:

(- means normal, / Up rising, ~ DAAAMN!, \ Down, "." What happened?, 1 sign is about 4 Beats)
//------//~~------~~------\---
Yours is like:
//------//.----------------\---

I could say, unfortunatly the "Wow" Effect is missing at the drop. But I am in best feelings you will solve that :)