<wip><nonpony><DNB/neuro/idontfuckingknowhelp>neurotic mess

[Berri]

a little project i through together today:
https://soundcloud.com/theberri/neurotic-mess-wip-formaly
it is no where near done but i would like to hear you guys opinions on it and i would like to know what genre this officialy is, because its at 140bpm yet it sounds faster and ihavenoideaplshelp.

thank you guys for your time.

[azerty]

This sounds like some form of garage, possibly 2-step garage (or maybe even nu-skool or dark breaks) due to the drum'n'bass sound influence and the archetypal "kick, snare, kick-snare" pattern being slightly swung. Sounds cool, whatever it is; obviously could use a fair deal more mixing and assorted tweaking, but you've got a good foundation.

[Berri]

https://soundcloud.com/theberri/neurotic-mess-wip
i finaly made some more

[Guthey]

First off, this is not DNB, the mood, tone, groove, and flow doesn't fit the DNB style. I have absolutely no idea what genre this is, but it sounds like a reggae/psy genre. Major problems when it comes to construction. there are too many thing going on at once that i don't actually know what i'm listening to or for. It could also use a major mixing overhaul. I don't know what is the lead is during 1:35- 2:20, and the 3:55-4:55. Also, some of the sounds are hard to hear, and by that I mean that they can't be heard clearly; it seems as if each sound is competing to be heard. Instead of just making random songs and throwing everything together, try having an idea of what you want to make, and try and listen to some DNB and some other EDM genres to better understand what a DNB and neuro dance are in terms of style. Best of luck!