by LutariFan » 14 Jan 2014 09:47
Oh. Sorry :P
So, I think there could be a bit more build-up before the drop at 1:00. I think that the crash after is good, but before the drop, maybe a sweep and/or, my personal favorite, a pluck that goes up in pitch.
Maybe it's just me but yea. ;)
The transition at 1:30 feels a little... clunky, imo. Not really sure how to describe it, but I feel like it could flow better.
Other than that I like it, your style is really nice to listen to :) I especially like the part at 1:15.