[Liquid DnB][Non-Pony][Remix]Ocular - Carefree

[Genkar]

I worked on this remix for a couple of weeks and finally decided to release it, not sure whether or not this is truly the final version, but I only plan on messing with it more if I choose to try and get it promoted.

Feedback would be cool too! :D

https://soundcloud.com/genkar/ocular-carefree-genkar-remix-1

On a side note, this was undoubtedly my largest project file to date.

[Injustrial]

The only thing I can think of is the snare. It sounds a bit tinny, with a little less air than I would have liked. Other than that, this is good work. Nice sounds, a good composition and a very pleasant energy. Mix seems to sit well, and everything works nicely together. I'd say, good job

[westjgames]

It's a great track, I'd have to check it on my monitors to make comments about the mastering, though.

[Genkar]

It's a great track, I'd have to check it on my monitors to make comments about the mastering, though.

I personally find it to be unbalanced, but that's just my opinion on it, which isn't ideal since I don't have monitors. >.>

[senntenial]

Nice intro, good diversity. I like the chord progression, it was pretty original.

As for mixing, sounds alright but (though we all could work on mixing) it could be improved. I think some elements lacked body, like the lead. Just all high mids and highs with nothing in the middle. Kind of Dillon Francis-y actually. Also watch when you have the explosiony sounds, because you push the limiter so hard to the point where the limiting is audible.

I love the parts where you just have the bass drum going with the arps and yoy-ish thingy. And yeah, idunno. It just sounds like you have inborn talent, nothing really seems forced and it flows well yeah yeh good jobs

Also what part of PA are you from? I'm up in the northeast section.

[Genkar]

Nice intro, good diversity. I like the chord progression, it was pretty original.

As for mixing, sounds alright but (though we all could work on mixing) it could be improved. I think some elements lacked body, like the lead. Just all high mids and highs with nothing in the middle. Kind of Dillon Francis-y actually. Also watch when you have the explosiony sounds, because you push the limiter so hard to the point where the limiting is audible.

I love the parts where you just have the bass drum going with the arps and yoy-ish thingy. And yeah, idunno. It just sounds like you have inborn talent, nothing really seems forced and it flows well yeah yeh good jobs

Also what part of PA are you from? I'm up in the northeast section.

First things first, thanks a ton, and I'm in Northeastern PA as well, Monroe County to be specific. :D

[senntenial]

woahhhhh i live in lackawanna county so I'm right next to you haha

[Conduit]

Really enjoyed this. I'm listening with headphones so I can't comment on the mix, but your definitely doing something right composition wise. Nice work!

[Genkar]

Really enjoyed this. I'm listening with headphones so I can't comment on the mix, but your definitely doing something right composition wise. Nice work!

Thanks! :D