[Non-Pony][Demo][Djent Metal] Untitled #3

[S.P.P]

This is an instrumental demo of one of my bands songs, I just wanna hear what you guys think. The mix is pretty basic.. :3
https://dl.dropbox.com/s/o4u50hvv2iaw6a ... 20Sexy.mp3

[EpiPony]

Djentish stuff. nice

Having said that, I really think the mix is pretty bad. The drums are pushing everything away so the riffs are barely hearable at points. The riffs on itself are pretty cool though.
Don't really know what else to say as it's not really finished or mixed properly =P

[S.P.P]

Yeah the mix is horrendous, it was just to bash ideas out into something I could write the vocal line too. I mostly wanted feedback on the composition itself, I should have said that hehe. Thanks for the feedback though. :3

[Jokeblue]

I really like it. It sounds kind of Egyptian in some parts without taking the obviously Egyptian sounding riffs like Iron Maiden did with Powerslave (which is really cool). It's got some really decent riffs in there, and It would sound awesome fully recorded and produced, especially if it had some vocals. Vocals would really help tie it all together. One can only listen to so much instrumental Djent, y'know? Not saying instrumental Djent is a bad thing at all, but really it seems to be a majority of what I hear.

[S.P.P]

Thanks for the feedback. Were gonna get it fully finished and with vocals soon to put on a 4(?) track EP so keep an eye out! ^^