<Dub><Pony><original><WIP> Mass3.0

[Guthey]

So I've been working on this for quiet sometime, only got the first 1:30 done, but i'm still working on it. So tell me what you guys think, criticism is welcomed, and be harsh if you must.

https://soundcloud.com/guthey/mass3-0

[Conduit]

Wow the sound design is really cool. I suggest shortening the final section with the synth down to a transition, it's crazy cool, but the length kills it. It would make an absolutely amazing pre-drop or something.

[Guthey]

Wow the sound design is really cool. I suggest shortening the final section with the synth down to a transition, it's crazy cool, but the length kills it. It would make an absolutely amazing pre-drop or something.

Thx, I worked for 90 hrs on this, nice to have some feedback. The final section, like at what time, 1:20 maybe? or are you taking about the transition at 40 seconds? and thanks again for the reply.

[Conduit]

I'm thinking that at 0:58, you should introduce some other sound, maybe a lead or a bass, honestly it doesnt really matter as long as it hits fairly hard. Then you could go back to the current sound between various other sounds. The problem right now is the song doesn't feel like its going anywhere, there was this big build up, and then the same thing as before the buildup for another 30 seconds. It just didn't feel right.

[Guthey]

Okay, I see what your saying, i'll be sure to work on that, thank you soooo much!