<WIP>Friendship

[CGEyeGuy]

http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/friendship-wip

Trying something a bit different than what I usually do.

[randomblockfilms]

mmmm interesting! the beginning is kind of lacking on instruments but unless you were kinda going for that sound then never mind. The end sounded pretty good maybe use a kick to bring it out more. but whatever you want to do is fine

[cyrricky]

I agree with randomblockfilms, the beginning sounds a bit devoid of instruments, but the progression is good. You might try adding a little teeny bit of reverb to the vocals, maybe - just a suggestion.

1:07 on reminds me of a film score, very sweet. Nice to listen to - I like it.

[CGEyeGuy]

http://soundcloud.com/cgeyeguy/friendship-wip2

Found out my computer is not a big fan of string vsts, luckily I had a nice soundfont.

mmmm interesting! the beginning is kind of lacking on instruments but unless you were kinda going for that sound then never mind. The end sounded pretty good maybe use a kick to bring it out more. but whatever you want to do is fine

Yeah it sounds way more better with more instruments. Even though I have a piano only currently.

I agree with randomblockfilms, the beginning sounds a bit devoid of instruments, but the progression is good. You might try adding a little teeny bit of reverb to the vocals, maybe - just a suggestion.

1:07 on reminds me of a film score, very sweet. Nice to listen to - I like it.

Good idea on the reverb. I am still deciding on if I should keep the delay effect near 1:07.

Now I need to figure out what to do with the rest of the song.