<remix><electro-metal(?)> Rainbow Factory Remix(+1 more tck)

[Revanchrist]

Since I get absolutelly no views on my channel anyway, I'm going to drop this thing in here and await for some critique. I aknowledge there are some high peaks in mid-high frequences when the organ plays, aside from that I'd like to know what else needs improvement:

[Advised for bronies who like dark music]


Both music and artwork is made by me.

And while I'm at it, I'll drop my latest track in here... so maybe you'd want to review that too? QvQ



Vocals in this one are mine btw.

[Conchetupony]

The organ sounds fine when it enters to me, might be 'cause my headphones add some bass (which I try to flatten with EQ when listening to stuff or working on music myself).

The vocals at 3:53 are too loud in comparison to the rest of the track. I know you want them to be the focus on that section, but usually a pinch of volume increase is enough, if even necessary.

Fine track otherwise, a bit bland due to the lack of variation throughout sections. Sounds like industrial metal to me.

Now about Sin City: Great track, with an industrial kind of feel as well. Lay down on the vocal effects if you want us to understand them. They clash with the bass on the middy spectrum (500 hz?), muddying up the mix. Maybe add some high end on the mix for clarity?