LIVE ANOTHER LIFE (FEEDBACK HEAVILY NEEDED) <PONY>

[vladnuke]

Hey rememeber that big deal I made when I was looking for choir people?

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/a41xwa7t5w3171p/Live_Another_Life.mp3

its done

the choir i decided to leave as a treat for MLR, but I'd like to know your guy's opinions on how the track went down in general.

Please please please leave me feedback, even if its just whether you like it or not, because anything at this stage is valuable.

This is gonna be the header track of an album, so I need it to shine.

To everyone who helped me make this, thank you very much.

[fatcat44101]

the vocals are really good and the instrumental part is awesome! I love the 8 bit kinda synths you used in this piece. I also like how you switched it up around 2 min. It added some diversity to the piece ;). I didn't really care for the vocals at the end, they seemed as though they were all kinda off a bit (not sure if it was supposed to be that way). It just kinda sounded weird.

Other than that, i liked it. gotta say, my favorite part were the 8 bit melodies. they sounded AWESOME, lol.

[CDPP]

Great vocals, but your synths are kinda basic. Vocals are kinda out of sync with the whole track btw. Structure and melody's fine though. Like that little arp solo thing in the middle

[vladnuke]

http://www.mediafire.com/listen/le1fgz61g7lolti/Live_Another_Life_(2nd_Version).mp3

I fixed a lot of things with the track, reworked a lot of the sound design, and now I think the track is ready for round 2.