[Pony] [Classical] The City's Leads

[Symphon]

A classical song based on one of my friend's characters, Grass Marks, a journalist. Saw a picture of him ( https://fbcdn-sphotos-f-a.akamaihd.net/ ... 7349_n.jpg ) and a story started running through my head. Pretty much, a story he was writing got him some info he didn't want to find out.

https://soundcloud.com/nulrei/the-citys-leads

[Pulse]

I like the sound design on that intro noise. Very eery and sinister.
At 0:38 (and the repeating measures throughout), there is some hardcore dissonance in there somewhere. I wanna say it's two piano notes. Something like that could add to the eery ambience, but in this case it feels too jarring.
The piano melody is very nice. Good work on that.
The strings play beautifully with the piano melody later in the track.
The ending felt a little abrupt. I would have put a few more dying (a.k.a. Filtered out) elements to signal the end, then ended on that chord.

Good work! Keep it up!

[Symphon]

I like the sound design on that intro noise. Very eery and sinister.
At 0:38 (and the repeating measures throughout), there is some hardcore dissonance in there somewhere. I wanna say it's two piano notes. Something like that could add to the eery ambience, but in this case it feels too jarring.
The piano melody is very nice. Good work on that.
The strings play beautifully with the piano melody later in the track.
The ending felt a little abrupt. I would have put a few more dying (a.k.a. Filtered out) elements to signal the end, then ended on that chord.

Good work! Keep it up!

Thanks for the feedback!