<Work in Progress> <Liquid Dubstep> Winter's Reach

[PropellerEscape]

This track's almost finished now - I'm just in the mastering stage - but I'd like to get some other ears on this to see how it sounds.
I'm really proud about how this turned out, seeing as it's my first time ever trying a chilled genre :3

https://soundcloud.com/propellerescape/winters-reach-wip

[Symphon]

It's got a nice tone to it. Interesting mood, I mean. Very simple, but very fluent and expressive.

I'm not exactly sure what's going up with that kick, and I'm not sure how I feel about it. Part of me likes it, and another part of me wants to tell you to make it a normal beat. But of course, that's boring, so keep it.

I feel like you should have a wider range of dynamics, though. Like, there's the sweeps, the bassy thing, the drums, and then the bell-thing. There's so much more you could put in to make it sound so much more reactive with the rest of the piece.

Digging it so far though.

[PropellerEscape]

Yeah I thought at times it got a little bland and repetitive, thanks for pointing it out though :3
I've already added some chopped vocals to fill some space, but I'll see if I can't add in a pad or some strings somewhere
Thanks for listening!