<Pony> <Original> Friendship Is A Work Of Art

[Electric Velocity]

https://soundcloud.com/electric-velocity/friendship-is-a-work-of-art

I'm not really looking for criticism on this one because I already know what's wrong with it. I won't point it out but I'm not totally satisfied with this track. I might do a remaster and shorten it in the future, but for now, I've exhausted myself on it. I am proud of the lyrics and tried to make them audible. It was my first time singing or rather, vocoding. If you want to leave feedback that's fine, I just have a plan for what I'm gonna change later on.

[Krunip]

The only real problem is that I think the vocoding is a bit heavy at times (like from 0:35 to 1:20), I can see the reason for it but i just feel that it's a waste of nice vocals. other than that i really like it.

[Sonarch]

I think this is pretty good! Especially with those vocoded vocals, I've always loved the way vocoding sounds. How'd you do them?

[Electric Velocity]

I used fruity Vocoder and lots of EQ'ing. I made my own carrier synth so it would sound like Daft Punk and I pre-recorded my vocals in Audacity.

[ph00tbag]

Well, the vocals are audible. They're also really hard to understand that. You might want to re-record the vocals, and enunciate like you're singing on broadway.

I'd also say the tune is really muddy on the low-end. Some eqing will clear that up (also, low shelving the piano, because the bass on that doesn't really need to be prominent..