<Dubstep><Non-Pony> Wisp - Dreams

[Wisp]

I wanted to try something new, so I made a dubstep song! This is my first serious dubstep song I've ever made, so I would love some feedback on it. I am very proud of it because it turned out exactly as I wanted it to :3

[Bronies Are Cool]

As I've said before, DAT INTRO!!!

[Mr.Afrox]

this is some serious ,good stuff somewhat revealing wisp :3
you are great and your songs are too i believe in you and im sure many others do too

[Wisp]

Thanks guys!

[S.P.P]

Dayum.

Well first of all, the sound design going on in here is excellent!
A couple things strike me if I had to give feedback. The intro sorta goes in for a while, so maybe bring in some pads subtly around the 25~30s mark (wherever that measure starts). Also, I'm
Not a huge fan of that style of buildup anyways, but here it just seems a little out of place. By no means does it destroy the track; but maybe in the future you should think what style of buildup best suits the vibe of your track?

That's all really, great job on this one!

[Wisp]

Thanks for the feedback! And the buildup was just something new I wanted to try out, since this whole track was about me trying out new things

[GCKrastin]

For some reason to me it sounds like the crash cymbal is off-beat from the kick drum.
The laser effects in the drop don't change pitch fast enough, it just sounds like a sound going from one note to another, it doesn't have that "pewpewpewpew" feel to me.
Also as others have said the buildup doesn't really fit to me, I think just a kick drum roll and maybe a filter sweep would have been better.
And lastly the doubletime part at 1:24 seems a little abrupt, I think it would have fit better in the second drop.

Otherwise, I liked it! The melody was nice, the bass was nice, the drums were nice, etc.

[Wisp]

Yeah, I think I probably could have done better with the lasers xD
Thanks for the feedback!