first chiptune song (yay)

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first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Facade » 13 Dec 2011 20:19

tell me what needs to be improved
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Calamus_Dash » 13 Dec 2011 21:10

needs a new name, otherwise pretty cool :D
how did this get here
i am not good with computer

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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Facade » 13 Dec 2011 21:46

Calamus_Dash wrote:needs a new name, otherwise pretty cool :D

haha thanks ^.^
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Overkillius » 14 Dec 2011 02:17

Someone tell me if I'm wrong (because I probably am), but I thought you essentially had to make chiptunes in Famitracker.... if you did make this in famitracker then you are a wizard.
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Facade » 14 Dec 2011 14:25

Overkillius wrote:Someone tell me if I'm wrong (because I probably am), but I thought you essentially had to make chiptunes in Famitracker.... if you did make this in famitracker then you are a wizard.

if i made this in fami tracker i would probably have more patients then anyone here but no i made it in fl 10 (haha i-pies gonna hurt me xD)
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Interrobang Pie » 14 Dec 2011 16:11

Facade wrote:(haha i-pies gonna hurt me xD)

TOO FUCKING RIGHT I AM

It's okay, I guess. Would have liked to hear some more duty cycles than just the 50%. Also the leads could use some volume envelopes of some kind.
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Facade » 14 Dec 2011 17:02

Interrobang Pie wrote:
Facade wrote:(haha i-pies gonna hurt me xD)

TOO FUCKING RIGHT I AM

It's okay, I guess. Would have liked to hear some more duty cycles than just the 50%. Also the leads could use some volume envelopes of some kind.

yea i didnt have all my chip vsts with me when i made this plus im still learning
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Candy Coda » 15 Dec 2011 00:31

I like it as it is, and I don't see a reason to improve it. I particularly dig what you do from 0:52-0:59. It does a nice job of setting you up for that transition.
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby randomblockfilms » 15 Dec 2011 08:25

wow! sounds great!! i dont really know how to improve this. i don't know much about chiptunes but i know what i like! and i like this!
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Re: first chiptune song (yay)

Postby Facade » 15 Dec 2011 13:41

haha thanks for all your support looks like i know what im making more of!
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