<Remix> <Non-pony> Technologic (Electric Velocity Remix)

[Electric Velocity]

https://soundcloud.com/electric-velocity/technologic-electric-velocity

[Sonarch]

Ooooh, this is nice!
If I had to pick on something for you to work on, I would say try and make it less repetitive. It's cool, but after five minutes it feels a little bit boring. I do hear the song changing between sections, so if you can improve on that the next one will be even better! And I like how the intro flows into the main part of the song, that can be really hard to do.

Hope i've been helpful in some small way :3

[Electric Velocity]

Ooooh, this is nice!
If I had to pick on something for you to work on, I would say try and make it less repetitive. It's cool, but after five minutes it feels a little bit boring. I do hear the song changing between sections, so if you can improve on that the next one will be even better! And I like how the intro flows into the main part of the song, that can be really hard to do.

Hope i've been helpful in some small way :3

I was trying to create emphasis on some of the sounds I used but perhaps it does repeat a bit. I am still very happy with the way it turned out. My only concern is that the lyrics were too loud, but on my last projects, people said the lyrics were too quiet, so I had to make them a lot louder. It's just, to my ears, the lyrics are in the way of the rest of the song.