<Semi-Pony><Trou5e>Sleep Home(Experimental Sleep Trou5e)

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<Semi-Pony><Trou5e>Sleep Home(Experimental Sleep Trou5e)

Postby Mr.Afrox » 23 Jun 2013 15:00

Sleep well my friends on this trip that hopefully will glare you with beauty and goodness as it did to me :D

when things get tough when life gets rough lets all dance and trance around our house lets sleep home one last time me and you...

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Re: <Semi-Pony><Trou5e>Sleep Home(Experimental Sleep Trou5e)

Postby DatWhackProducer » 24 Jun 2013 18:49

WATCH OUT FOR 1:21 SON, ALMOST BLASTED MAH SPEARKE

2:05's High frequencies sound cut off, and it makes it awkward in the midst of all of the rich, hi-fi sound you have earlier. There seems to be awkward cuts into different sections of the song.

Personally I don't like synth voice, but whatevs. Overall good idea, needs better mastering.
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Re: <Semi-Pony><Trou5e>Sleep Home(Experimental Sleep Trou5e)

Postby Mr.Afrox » 24 Jun 2013 18:55

thanks for the awsome review , i love honest reviewers :3

and your tips were wonderful /)
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Re: <Semi-Pony><Trou5e>Sleep Home(Experimental Sleep Trou5e)

Postby Facade » 24 Jun 2013 19:17

the transition around 1:20 could be better

and this

2:05's High frequencies sound cut off, and it makes it awkward in the midst of all of the rich, hi-fi sound you have earlier. There seems to be awkward cuts into different sections of the song.


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