[Pony] [instrumental] Forever A Bully (Electro)

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[Pony] [instrumental] Forever A Bully (Electro)

Postby Viricide Filly » 24 Jun 2013 15:14



Criticism greatly appreciated.
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Re: [Pony] [instrumental] Forever A Bully (Electro)

Postby Facade » 24 Jun 2013 15:29

loved the chord progression in the beginning
kick sounded a little odd but that's probably just my personal taste
noise sounds remind my of hardstyle ^.^

all in all its pretty cool
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Re: [Pony] [instrumental] Forever A Bully (Electro)

Postby Pulse » 25 Jun 2013 16:25

You could use a little more of a build when leading into the electro drop. Use a pitch bend synth or white noise (at the least).
All of your main synths feel muffled; you can fix this via filters (open them) or EQ (boost the high shelf).
The track also feels empty; it could benefit from a pad or two or maybe even a synth with a longer release.
That kick sounds fine (in my opinion). Good job on adding a high click so it pops through the mix.

And don't forget about the awesomeness that is panning! It took me forever to discover it's usefulness and even now I don't use it well. It can be very beneficial to making your track sound bigger and more full.

Overall, not a bad mix, it could just be cleaned up a bit. Keep it up!
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