<Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

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<Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Captivated » 17 Jun 2013 13:07

https://soundcloud.com/david-granados-2/save-the-day

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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Pulse » 17 Jun 2013 21:28

Good sir, that is one of the most awesome tracks I have heard in recent months.

Liked, downloaded, and followed! ^_^
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Captivated » 17 Jun 2013 21:36

Pulse wrote:Good sir, that is one of the most awesome tracks I have heard in recent months.

Liked, downloaded, and followed! ^_^


Thank You! I'm really glad you liked it!
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby ph00tbag » 21 Jun 2013 11:58

Haha, when the rhythm section kicked in, I thought you just had a crazy reverb on the kick. I didn't realize that that was the bass until the chord changed.

I like it. The melody is fun and driving. Well done.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Mr.Afrox » 23 Jun 2013 14:58

beautifully executed and well driven towards concrete synths and a melody i wiil surely never forget

loved it keep it up bro :D
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Captivated » 24 Jun 2013 07:24

Mr.Afrox wrote:beautifully executed and well driven towards concrete synths and a melody i wiil surely never forget.

loved it keep it up bro :D


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I'm really glad you like it! :D
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby Captivated » 24 Jun 2013 07:27

ph00tbag wrote:Haha, when the rhythm section kicked in, I thought you just had a crazy reverb on the kick. I didn't realize that that was the bass until the chord changed.

I like it. The melody is fun and driving. Well done.


Should i fix up the bass, or do you think it's good as it is? Also I'm glad you like the melody!
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby PropellerEscape » 24 Jun 2013 09:48

I liked it a looooot.
Only qualms I have are that the percussive hats in the drop are a bit too loud and piercing, and the bass tail on the kick drum is out of pitch and sounds a bit weird.
Also, the part at 1:35 where everything dies out doesn't flow at all. The sweep really need some reverb/slight delay on it, or you can have another sweep to fill in some space.
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Re: <Pony><Original><Progressive House> Save The Day

Postby ph00tbag » 24 Jun 2013 18:13

Captivated wrote:Should i fix up the bass, or do you think it's good as it is? Also I'm glad you like the melody!

I'm not sure I would say it needs to be changed. It's more an observation than anything. If that's an impression you don't want to give with the tune, then yeah, you should look into ways to improve it, but if you don't think that effect has a negative impact, then I don't think there should be any pressure on you to change it.
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