I liked it, nice and slow and pretty.
Your vocals sound just fine, especially considering the microphone you use, and that you added an effect onto them, plus the music. I wouldn't change a thing.
And a laptop microphone is nothing to scoff at; it works, doesn't it? xD Half of the vocal samples/WIP songs/horrid things on my page where recorded with a C210 Logitech Webcam, and Audacity. If it sounds good, nopony should care
'Course mine don't sound very good, but that contradicts the point I made, doesn't it?