<original><wip> Feedback please!

[DJ TATCM]

So, I've been working on this for the past few days. My friend actually told me to keep this as secretive as possible (he says that it's really good), but I think that some serious feedback as to mixing and stuff would really benefit. Don't worry about the structure, I know that it's really primitive, choppy, and stupid right now, but I'm just working on the synths/beat at the moment. Like Paul Williams sang in that one song, "I need something more", and I feel like it's missing something. Anyone got any ideas? I'd love to hear how awful you think I sound!

btw I spent 5 years on the artwork

[Gain]

At the moment, to me, it sounds pretty good. Maybe turn the bass down a little bit though, it kind of drowns out everything else and maybe save the sidechain until that lead hits, just to make the build feel a little more powerful. That's all just my personal opinion though, I'm no expert lol. Would love to hear it when it's done.

[DJ TATCM]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I was thinking about turning some stuff down, since I'm planning to add vocals, but I wasn't sure what to do until now