<Pony><Rap> Hex Girl

[MALevolence]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2iMhKbbNEGk
so here we are folks, another rap by yours truly. im rather proud of this one, lyrically and flow wise. i know im still improving on mixing/mastering, but hey, ill get there.

[Symphon]

The flow is pretty nice, definitely not faltering for pretty much any of the song. The backing was smooth, although I'm not sure if you made that or got it from somewhere. Lyrics are solid throughout the song, and your vocalization isn't bad either. One problem I have with it, though, is when you have those occasional layering of vocals so it sounds like two voices at once. It's used way too much, so when it is used, it doesn't catch your attention like it's supposed to, and it doesn't have much depth to it either. Maybe add some interesting effects to the second voice to make it different from the main one.