Rainbow & Rooted: Four's Fall Down

[Camsy]

Hmm, I should probably start working on something now... eh, maybe next album.

[Alycs]

Well, I finished my song and have a youtube link; now its just getting it to upload to dropbox in .wav that's the problem...

[Lying Pink]

Agrflarbl so nearly finished so little time left
I'm ricocheting wildly between thinking, "aah, my baby is almost finished" and being so sick of the track after all the hours I've put into it that I'd be more than happy to never hear it again in my life.
I think I'll settle on a healthy mixture of the two.

[VeePoint2]

I'll just be happy I finally got my submission in...

[StevenAD]

/bandwagon

[OrionMelody]

So this is it!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=djvUU_r9rgk

I uploaded it last night. Tell me what you think of it.
Thanks!

(EDIT) How do I make it so you can play a video/song right here? You know, instead of clicking on a link?

[ExoBassTix]

Omg Orion *o*
Use [youtube] and [/youtube]. Put link inbetween, make sure to change https to http.

[PinkieGuy]

So, like I've finished my track and submitted a version for feedback, but I didn't quite get there before the 'Last date for feedback' day. Can I still get some feedback please? I think some of the vocals are too loud, but it's hard to tell on my current mixing setup.

[Circuitfry]

Any submissions after this very moment will not receive quick feedback unless requested, but you'll have to wait until after all the others, if you want to ask me. Also, Lavender is 100% unavailable, don't ask her.

[Nine Volt]

So this is it!



I uploaded it last night. Tell me what you think of it.
Thanks!

(EDIT) How do I make it so you can play a video/song right here? You know, instead of clicking on a link?

[Lying Pink]

Wow, that track's really sweet. I'm very excited to hear what makes it onto the album

[Nine Volt]

As for Orion's song... eh.

Not a fan of the near-constant pretty low end, it makes it much less intense when the 'drop' happens. Plus there's dissonance all over the place and it's not used well. It's also way longer than it needs to be, without enough variation to keep it interesting. That snare is kinda weak too. But it's mostly the dissonance and near-constant pseudo-sub bass that make me dislike it.

[Lying Pink]

I'm not sure I'm picking up on the dissonance. It seems to be built around an Eb major/B major chord progression, meaning it's shifting around using some non-diatonic harmonies, but I kinda like that.
In fact, come to think of it, all of the things you say you disliked about it were the reasons I enjoyed it Welp, one man's meat is another man's poison, as they say.

[Nine Volt]

Go to 2:35.

Tell me that's not dissonant/out of key and you're lying

[Lying Pink]

You mean the pitch-bend from the Db to the Eb? Don't think it's off-key, it's just a slow pitch-bend.

and you're lying

What you did there. I see it.

[Nine Volt]

:3

Not the pitch bend, the chords themselves up to the droppy thingy

[Lying Pink]

Ah, gotcha.
...I genuinely still can't hear it, sorry! Maybe we've just got different conceptions of what does and doesn't sound in-key. Or maybe my ears are tired. *shrug*
Either way oh god I'm procrastinating post-derailing (sorry) here when I should be finishin' mah choon. Lying away!
(and good luck, all)

[Raddons]

Dissonance =/= bad

[Nine Volt]

Dissonance =/= bad

I never said that. However, I don't like how he used dissonance in his track.

[FLAOFEI]

I got my track in before the feedback deadline... I havent gotten any yet. Is it on request?
Cause I would like some feedback, although I'm not sure I could change anything due to real life busyness.

[Nine Volt]

I got mine in fairly early and I haven't gotten any either, so I wouldn't worry about it.

[OrionMelody]

Hm.. I guess I can understand the whole sub-bass thing. I seem to have trouble with that sometimes. But what are you talking about dissonance? Are you talking about the fact that I use extra notes in my chords? (E, F#,G#,B) Is that what you're talking about? Thank you for feedback.

[00ccff]

Just got my track in.

[Stakeout Punch]

Still smoothing this one out, as I scrapped my first track for R&R: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/vxi ... /ECGRR.ogg

[Mr. Bigglesworth]

Have fun with that deadline Y'all.

;3