<Pony><Original> Light Veins - Desolation (Post-Rock)

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<Pony><Original> Light Veins - Desolation (Post-Rock)

Postby LightVeins » 20 May 2013 08:16

So, I decided to do some more Post-Rock, enjoy!

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Re: <Pony><Original> Light Veins - Desolation (Post-Rock)

Postby ThatRobChap » 20 May 2013 14:14

Ah, I don't see much post-rock around here. Certainly something I'd like to see more of.
The guitar is nice. At first, after a while of it being just that guitar, I thought it needed some more to it, and as I was thinking that, more things started happening. :lol:
I don't know, personally, I'd probably have some other things come in a bit sooner, but that's just me.
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Re: <Pony><Original> Light Veins - Desolation (Post-Rock)

Postby LightVeins » 21 May 2013 03:55

I always have trouble making songs that aren't repetitive. I try to have as many changes as possible, though they do often end up dragging on, so I see what you mean. Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: <Pony><Original> Light Veins - Desolation (Post-Rock)

Postby VaporBlaze » 21 May 2013 22:53

I'll admit that I have a bad habit about mainly complaining about repetitiveness in my feedback, but I realized that it's not even a valid complaint, it's very context specific.

You only should be worried repetitiveness if you don't want your music to be repetitive. I know that sounds kinda obvious and dumb, but think about it this way: what do you want your music to be? Ambient/passive/background/soothing, or active, and attention grabbing? I think that this piece sounds just fine as it is if it is meant to be the former, but yes it could use some work if it is meant to be the latter.

It's basically up to you as the creator to decide if it is too repetitive, and you only have a problem with making repetitive songs if you don't think they sound good as repetitive. Personally, I've really enjoyed all your songs, and I think this one is fine as is!

Nice work!
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