[Breakcore]Insomnia(Luna Help Me please)

[Ohffy]

https://soundcloud.com/ohffy/insomnias

I haven't been sleeping a lot lately
So i made a song about it
Any critique would be much appreciated

Thanks for listening

[KillerAmp]

Synth sounds kinda like, pushed back too far in the track. idk much about break-core so theres not much else i can point out :S

[Freewave]

It's not too bad, but if does feel like a few synths and separate melodies thrown over each other. It just doesn't gel and turn into a track with a great hook or any real surprises. Feels like its still in a wip stage but i'd advise you to keep working on it as its got potential.

[Ohffy]

Synth sounds kinda like, pushed back too far in the track. idk much about break-core so theres not much else i can point out :S

Yeah i kinda pushed it back so i could focus on the drums more and i forgot to push it back i guess
My bad

It's not too bad, but if does feel like a few synths and separate melodies thrown over each other. It just doesn't gel and turn into a track with a great hook or any real surprises. Feels like its still in a wip stage but i'd advise you to keep working on it as its got potential.

Oh dude this is still a early early Work In Progress
i guess I should have put that in the title
The synths and all that are just placeholders I'm still working on

Thanks for the advice guys