<wip><chiphouse>Retro Nightmare

[Nine Volt]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/ef8 ... Idtsw&dl=1

Sorry for the dropbox link, I'm not going to upload this one to Soundcloud until I'm sure it's good. This is something Chip and I made (he made the lead melody and recorded the gameboy, I made the chords and all that), it's chip-house or something. I think it turned out really well and now I want some feedback please :3

[KillerAmp]

Its a bit abstract for my tastes but thats just me I think that it sounds nice and i would just pick at the crackling in the intro, maybe when the filtered 'drums' come in you could start the crackling, but before that it could just be a lighter atmospheric sound, idk.
the chords are nice
the whole thing sound really mono, that might be purposeful, but I think it would sound sick with some more panning in instruments, it just all feels really centered and kinda muddy. but teh whole melodic setup and chordal progressions are nice. Only other thing i would pick on is maybe making the sub more present.
overall its pretty awesome man, keep it up!

[Nine Volt]

Revised (a bit)!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pb23pcq8ldikd ... 0think.mp3

Made use of panning more and boosted the sub slightly, as well as smoothing out some EQing. Oh yeah, also changed the intro a tiny bit.

[KillerAmp]

Yessss. That intro is exactly what i was thinking would work better.
Overall i think the small edits improved the track, its soundin really sick now

[Nine Volt]

Thanks