<Pony> <Poetry with Improv> Petals and Ivory WIP

[VaporBlaze]

Hey guys, got a WIP that I wanted some feedback on. This is my first time doing improv, I think it turned out pretty well. I wrote the poem after reading a very nice work featuring Octavia giving Minuette a piano lesson.
I recorded the improve 3 different times, and picked my favorite pieces from each and put them together.
Here it is with my voice:
https://soundcloud.com/mathematicus/petals-and-ivory-wip
And instrumental:
https://soundcloud.com/mathematicus/petals-and-ivory-wip-1

I'm not particularly fond of my voice, so if anyone wants to do a reading of it, that would be sweet!