Every Crooked Mile (FEEDBACK PLEASE)

[CaptainFluffatun]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0n-vgDle ... re=related

Feedback, please c: I know the guitar sounds cheesy but what can one do . . .

[Howlgram]

ewww,those default demo sounds. lol
for real, there are some sounds really not fitting in there.
But it is not bad, the composition is cool. Though i like more your other songs, "spring" is awesome :3

the lack of pony disturbs me.

[CaptainFluffatun]

A) I like your signature and
B) I'm actually working on a guitar cover of For the New Lunar Republic today and hope to have it up tonight. You should totally check it out :3
C) Thank you for the feedback

[bartekko]

The Drumline In this one is a pretty strange something: It sounds like it was meant to be simulating a real drummer, but the lack of expresiveness makes it sound like a drum machine. A heartless drum machine.

The synth sawtooth wave doesn't have any hook, it's a very orchestralistic approach to electronic sound, which is very hard to do good.

The guitar should be played by a real guitarist because it lacks the expression
Otherwise, i *kinda* like that

[CaptainFluffatun]

I might do another version of this wherein I play the guitar, because I detest FL Slayer with all my heart, but it's the only guitar sound I have . . .