<pony><original><VIP>Dinky's Lullaby VIP

[JSynth]

Made a VIP of one of my old songs to get some practice in with mixing and mastering.

Let's try this eqbeats thing.

[Forza SoundFire]

Overall, not bad.
Remember to leave some time before the track starts. This can be done in the bouncedown window by adjusting the starting bar.
Also, I think that ride is noisy? Might be worth swapping it for another one.

[VaporBlaze]

It has a nice, smooth and mellow feel to it, but I think I hear some kind of noise or buzzing in the background. Did you record any of it acoustically? Or is it the part of the drums? Definitely awesome track for a lullaby, ever consider writing lyrics to go with it?

One critic: it seems to end rather abruptly, I would have looped a couple more times and gradually take away instruments from it rather than just fade out with everything still playing.