<Original> <Non-pony> <Hands Up!> Don't Let Me Go

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<Original> <Non-pony> <Hands Up!> Don't Let Me Go

Postby ExoBassTix » 28 Mar 2013 14:21

https://soundcloud.com/exobasstix/dont-let-me-go
One of my most recent productions, that I'm very proud of. Anyone got constructive criticism?
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Re: <Original> <Non-pony> <Hands Up!> Don't Let Me Go

Postby hackd » 29 Mar 2013 13:50

Very strong track. I really liked the texture of the transitional snare rolls. My favorite part was the sustained vocals at 0:47 and 4:11 though I think you could still improve them by adding some motion; even some minor filter automation could do a lot.

Then in your main verse, I think it would have been nice to switch up either the instrumentation or the pattern a bit.

And it sounds like some of the high ends could be compressed a bit so they're not so sharp.

But great track, very impressive.
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Re: <Original> <Non-pony> <Hands Up!> Don't Let Me Go

Postby ExoBassTix » 30 Mar 2013 11:20

Thanks for the kind and helpful words. The song is pretty much final now, so I'm not really planning on editing it anytime soon, but if I want to I'll look at it some time. Thank you!
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