by hackd » 29 Mar 2013 13:50
Very strong track. I really liked the texture of the transitional snare rolls. My favorite part was the sustained vocals at 0:47 and 4:11 though I think you could still improve them by adding some motion; even some minor filter automation could do a lot.
Then in your main verse, I think it would have been nice to switch up either the instrumentation or the pattern a bit.
And it sounds like some of the high ends could be compressed a bit so they're not so sharp.
But great track, very impressive.