<original> You're Going To Love Me

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<original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 24 Feb 2012 14:54

Mh i bet someone already used that as a song title...

Anyway, hi there. A fellow brony directed me here and said i should post this here (that was before he heard the finished version :D ):

http://soundcloud.com/gnarrkhaz/gnarrkhaz-youre-going-to-love

First: I'm glad that i actually finished a song for a change. Normally i just write stuff that sounds good but i'm incapable of putting it together in a song.

Second: I don't know about you but i don't like it, not necessarily for the obvious reasons (poorly set up guitar (need a new one) and unclean guitar playing for example). I don't know. It just doesn't sound right. I don't know how else to put it. Of course it's very corny sounding but that was intentional (who knows, maybe i shouldn't have done that?)

I'm already done with a new track (Twilight this time) and i will start recording it shortly. It would be cool if someone could give me feedback so that i can do better next time.
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Re: <original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby soup2504 » 24 Feb 2012 16:49

GNARR! Listened to it(thankfully soundcloud works on this internet), first 24 ish seconds could've been improved upon, but after that, it was just perfect. Seriously. Can't wait for the Twilight one ^_^
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Re: <original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 24 Feb 2012 17:01

Thanks. :D

But still: My guitar! Argh! That interval at 0:45 is NO octave! I definitely need a new guitar. : P
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Re: <original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby soup2504 » 26 Feb 2012 10:10

Gnarrkhaz wrote:But still: My guitar! Argh! That interval at 0:45 is NO octave! I definitely need a new guitar. : P


But something that little won't ruin the song entirely, now would it ;)?
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Re: <original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 26 Feb 2012 14:53

soup2504 wrote:But something that little won't ruin the song entirely, now would it ;)?


No, not entirely. It's just one of many aspects.
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Re: <original> You're Going To Love Me

Postby Gnarrkhaz » 30 Aug 2012 07:48

remastered Version:

http://soundcloud.com/gnarrkhaz/youre-going-to-love-me

Sounds a lot better.
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