<remix>Generosity (Chaos Sprite Remix)

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<remix>Generosity (Chaos Sprite Remix)

Postby ChaosSprite » 04 Jan 2014 21:21



yay new thing

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Re: <remix>Generosity (Chaos Sprite Remix)

Postby LutariFan » 05 Jan 2014 06:51

WOW you're fast

And this sounds awesome :D
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Re: <remix>Generosity (Chaos Sprite Remix)

Postby ChaosSprite » 11 Jan 2014 18:15

LutariFan wrote:WOW you're fast

And this sounds awesome :D


Thanks, but I'd appreciate some feedback of the track and not just "omg you're so fast".
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Re: <remix>Generosity (Chaos Sprite Remix)

Postby LutariFan » 14 Jan 2014 09:47

Oh. Sorry :P

So, I think there could be a bit more build-up before the drop at 1:00. I think that the crash after is good, but before the drop, maybe a sweep and/or, my personal favorite, a pluck that goes up in pitch.

Maybe it's just me but yea. ;)

The transition at 1:30 feels a little... clunky, imo. Not really sure how to describe it, but I feel like it could flow better.

Other than that I like it, your style is really nice to listen to :) I especially like the part at 1:15.
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