<pony><original> Still Friends

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<pony><original> Still Friends

Postby Wisp » 17 Feb 2013 19:28

This is a dubstep song I made about the season 3 finale, and how the mane six will still be friends even after Twilight has become an alicorn and times are tough between them.
Feedback is appreciated! :D

https://soundcloud.com/chaomoon/still-friends-download-in
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Re: <pony><original> Still Friends

Postby Stakeout Punch » 18 Feb 2013 15:40

I have nothing to say other than awesome!

I see that soundcloud link, I see a field trip to soundcloud is in order.
I rarely visit anymore. Also known as ZeoHeart and Xeno.
https://soundcloud.com/stakeoutpunch/sets/adios-ep
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Re: <pony><original> Still Friends

Postby Genkar » 18 Feb 2013 16:35

Eh, drop sounds kind of empty, and it doesn't really feel like it fits the rest of the song. Try to add some kind of melody or something under it, it could change the mood a bit, and make it sound more full. And your transitions are kinda meh, they could be improved. The melody is pretty chill, and glitched vox are pretty cool. I'd just work on making your drop fit everything, because the melody is so relaxing, and the drop is more intense, so it kinda randomly shifts moods throughout the track, so just work on that. Not going to critique mixing and such because I'm still pretty new myself.
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Re: <pony><original> Still Friends

Postby Wisp » 19 Feb 2013 11:54

Genkar wrote:Eh, drop sounds kind of empty, and it doesn't really feel like it fits the rest of the song. Try to add some kind of melody or something under it, it could change the mood a bit, and make it sound more full. And your transitions are kinda meh, they could be improved. The melody is pretty chill, and glitched vox are pretty cool. I'd just work on making your drop fit everything, because the melody is so relaxing, and the drop is more intense, so it kinda randomly shifts moods throughout the track, so just work on that. Not going to critique mixing and such because I'm still pretty new myself.

Yeah, I had a feeling that the drop was kind of weak...
In my next dubstep song I'll try to make the drop sound more "full".
Thanks for the feedback! :D
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