<pony><Original Death Metal> Deicide by DivinumX

[Astral]

Hello MLR! After 2 months, I finally finished this song. It took my a really long time to learn how to mix vocals decently and I think I did pretty good on it.

This is the official release, but what do you guys think I could have done to make it better? It's always nice to hear opinions for future projects

Enjoy!

-DivinumX

[Stu Beef]

Haha, this is pretty awesome; it's got a sort of old-school sound that I dig. The vox can definitely come forward more. I think the tone on them is right, so just bump the volume. I feel, in the more aggressive riffs, you'd benefit from a punchier guitar tone: something with just a bit more clarity/bite, but it can be a bit beefier too (whatever that all means to you in terms of adjustments). That section at 1:34 in particular feels a tad muddy. The solo could come forward as well; maybe even brighten up the tone a little bit to give it that bit of edge over everything else. I also feel like that outro with the clean guitar should have a more ethereal/transparent feel (wider and maybe even thinner in tone?).Still, sick song.

[Astral]

Haha, this is pretty awesome; it's got a sort of old-school sound that I dig. The vox can definitely come forward more. I think the tone on them is right, so just bump the volume. I feel, in the more aggressive riffs, you'd benefit from a punchier guitar tone: something with just a bit more clarity/bite, but it can be a bit beefier too (whatever that all means to you in terms of adjustments). That section at 1:34 in particular feels a tad muddy. The solo could come forward as well; maybe even brighten up the tone a little bit to give it that bit of edge over everything else. I also feel like that outro with the clean guitar should have a more ethereal/transparent feel (wider and maybe even thinner in tone?).Still, sick song.

Thanks a lot for the response

I still have a lot to improve on. Thanks for the tips, I will definitely keep them in mind when I work on my next project!