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by **Nicisflee** » 20 Jan 2013 20:15

Delete my Profile please, please delete it

by **itroitnyah** » 20 Jan 2013 20:22

Just, you know...

Haha, so did you make the part at the beginning based on what I said?

Really good overall. I like it. A bit repetitive for my tastes

by **Nicisflee** » 20 Jan 2013 20:44

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by **Sonarch** » 21 Jan 2013 10:46

I agree, it's pretty good, but it's repetitive. Perhaps some kind of chorus to break it up?
And a few of the rhymes sound a little forced, like they almost rhymed or worked with the meter, but not quite. Not saying it's terrible, but just something that can always be improved.

YouTube · by **Freewave** » 23 Jan 2013 16:57

Pretty good. Vocals might be just a LIL too high in the mix but they sound real good, maybe a bit too street but i guess they meet the concept. Lyrics are pretty sharp and well done. Background music is a bit too plain and a chorus could have been awesome to better divide it up. Pretty good job but could be better structured with some variety in there. It's all words one after the other and the background music too is just samey. Gotta break that up and have a chrous or at least an interesting instrumental break. Always glad to hear more songs ABOUT the community which i think brony music should take on, it's not always about ponies sometimes its about us too. I applaud the idea but don't forget to finish the track if it's still lacking in places or too samey.