It looks like you're linking to
https://soundcloud.com/captain-galactic ... our-demons instead of
https://soundcloud.com/captain-galactic ... emons-song there. You should probably fix that, because the track itself seems really nice. I honestly don't know the genre well enough to offer much criticism. It sounds really well put-together, and everything seems to flow perfectly with the possible exception of right around the 2:55 mark. It seems to follow pretty much every rule, which can be great or terrible or just an incorrect statement because I am not an authority on this style of music at all, mind you. In all honesty, I'd just feel bad not at least trying to offer criticism after bringing up the issue with the link.