<Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

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<Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby kmerl » 09 Jan 2013 03:45

Hello!
My Uplifting Trance remix on Love is in Bloom by Daniel Ingram!
Enjoy!
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby Patashu » 09 Jan 2013 16:50

Nitpicks:
0:45: The vocal stutter is not QUITE lined up with the song here. It's subtle but fixable for sure.
1:27: I feel like this would be a more interesting transition if, instead of the reverse cymbal becoming nothing, it turned into a forward, heavily echoing cymbal. Like what happens at 1:41 but try something a bit different~

Major nitpick:
2:16 (and all repeats): The drum sample that starts here, I really don't like the way it starts really unquantized and chaotic. It feels like it wasn't lined up with the song at all, and I seriously had to make sure it wasn't something else playing!
This annoys me a lot in otherwise solidly executed Uplifting Trance. :) Definitely keep composing!
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby randomblockfilms » 11 Jan 2013 01:58

wow mixed well it does sound! but here are some things i think might make it a bit little better. maybe.

vocals at 0:32 and 0:40 and 0:45 and 0:52 sound a bit too clean. maybe some like eq effects or overdrive or something so that they don't sound so clean and bland.

but other than that is sounds rather solid. also sounds very trancey and also why did you not end on a DOMINATE CHORD!?!?!?! made me go CRAZY!!!! i had to play it on piano so that it wouldn't ring in my head. lol
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby TheMalenEst » 11 Jan 2013 11:25

Really well mixed. But as randomblockfilms i think the vocals are a bit clean to, but thats just personal preference.
Also the Bass is really really well done if i must say :) sexy and clean
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby Sonic Breakbeat » 11 Jan 2013 13:24

Patashu wrote:Nitpicks:
0:45: The vocal stutter is not QUITE lined up with the song here. It's subtle but fixable for sure.
1:27: I feel like this would be a more interesting transition if, instead of the reverse cymbal becoming nothing, it turned into a forward, heavily echoing cymbal. Like what happens at 1:41 but try something a bit different~

Major nitpick:
2:16 (and all repeats): The drum sample that starts here, I really don't like the way it starts really unquantized and chaotic. It feels like it wasn't lined up with the song at all, and I seriously had to make sure it wasn't something else playing!
This annoys me a lot in otherwise solidly executed Uplifting Trance. :) Definitely keep composing!

That "kick" you think is unquantized is actually the camera snapshot sound from the vocal-only version of the episode. There's no work around for this, so if you listen to other Love Is In Bloom remixes the chorus will always have those sounds :/

Anyways, sounds nice. The mix is pretty good, as stated above, although I think the vocals sound alright. Not much else I can say about it, so good job :P
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Re: <Pony> <Remix> Love Is In Bloom [Trance]

Postby RevenantJesh » 13 Jan 2013 01:25

No Nitpicks. Youre amazing :) DONT LISTEN TO THESE PONIES, YOURE DOING AWESOME!!
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