<pony><origanal>The Timberwolf

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[Freewave]

Honestly if you're going to post your own music in the music review section and not review anyone else OR contribute to any other discussions on this board, you might as well just catalog it in your own thread in the discography section perhaps. MLR and the music subforum aren't designed for only promotion, it's for getting feedback AND giving it to others. Not trying to start a fight. I know you got loads of talent and we're glad to have you here but just try to get more involved on here if you plan to use it fairly.

The track itself is a bit all over the place. I liked the unpreditable musical aspects of it before it got all unexpectedly wubby and some of the instrumentation is pretty cool sounding and well mixed but it just seems to not be fully thought in terms of structure. It seems to move around with variety but doesn't really seem planned out as an actual track i think. It's definitely an episode response but i come ouot of the track confused about what the takeaway is.

[randomblockfilms]

Honestly if you're going to post your own music in the music review section and not review anyone else OR contribute to any other discussions on this board, you might as well just catalog it in your own thread in the discography section perhaps. MLR and the music subforum aren't designed for only promotion, it's for getting feedback AND giving it to others. Not trying to start a fight. I know you got loads of talent and we're glad to have you here but just try to get more involved on here if you plan to use it fairly. :?

agreed! if ya gonna post in the music thread expect to git some feedback! :D even if you post no words wif your song.

sounds goodish to me but what bugs me is the growling synth thing at 1:35. kinda sounds weak and messy. and also the general song kinda sounds a bit bland. from the transition of the rhythmic drums and then the growling, then back to the percussion, just feels a bit awkward. mixed nicely, i feel that it is, but complete is what i think it isn't.

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okay im sorry for thinking I could share my music here.

I guess this isnt the right place for me since im not good at giving feedback.

so you can go ahead delete this post then.

most likely not gonna post anything else in the future.

[Freewave]

I'm not trying to scare you away. You've been making music in the community forever so surely there's some involvement you can do with site between reviewing other's tracks, giving a lesson in techniques, to getting involved in existing music discussions. There's just an expectation that RYM is a community to be involved in and that the music section is not a place to just drop off tracks to get viewed. If that still doesn't sound like something you're interested then I'm sorry this wasn't a good fit.