<Pony><original><Black Metal> Sacrifice The Young To Luna

[Natas_blackmane]

This is a hard core black metal song about a pony who was called by a god *Luna* who told him what really happend in the war and how Celestia changed what every pony is told to make luna look evil and her look good theres lots more to it but i will lave that to you all haha.
-Natas Blackmane



~Lyrics~

Night
For ever

I feel her presence
It grows in the atmosphere
The goddess of the dark
I feel her draws near
I feed from her power
Her unstoppable might
She does not tell the lies
She brings only
The truest of light

Bring them
Bring them all
The followers of this fake goddess
Her sun killed the land
She sits upon the throne
Tonight the fire shall be lighten
And the world returns to its darkened
State !

The goddesses lay beside me
The whispered tales of lies
Bestowed upon me
And blocks the evil rays
Celestia she lies
And the heat shall stop with
The death of her days

Luna will rise
Her power grows
And the sun will die
Sacrifice the children to Luna


Bring them
Bring them all
The followers of this fake goddess
Her sun killed the land
She sits upon the throne
Tonight the fire shall be lighten
And the world returns to its darkened
State !
State !

[ghelded_kultz]

Once again you bring more of what the fandom needs. I love this song.

Some stylistic things (AKA things I like that might not actually be good suggestions):

1) The Steve Albini (I know he's more associate with alt and noise rock but still) says to put the vocals a little farther back into the mix (maybe the drums too. There are times when it those two things make the guitars real hard to hear)

2) Remember Black Metal can never be too under-produced (Though the song is pretty raw).

3) More distortion (This is less of a genre thing and more of a me thing. I love distortion and feedback).

Anyway, good song. Also gratz on the EqD feature for your last song.

[Natas_blackmane]

Once again you bring more of what the fandom needs. I love this song.

Some stylistic things (AKA things I like that might not actually be good suggestions):

1) The Steve Albini (I know he's more associate with alt and noise rock but still) says to put the vocals a little farther back into the mix (maybe the drums too. There are times when it those two things make the guitars real hard to hear)

2) Remember Black Metal can never be too under-produced (Though the song is pretty raw).

3) More distortion (This is less of a genre thing and more of a me thing. I love distortion and feedback).

Anyway, good song. Also gratz on the EqD feature for your last song.

Thanks bro and yea i was really happy with the EqD
XD and i know i really should have pushed the vocals down abit and the guitars up and put more Distortion on but i was going for a very gorgoroth feeling with this one and to much distortion would kill that felling haha but yea next time a little more time spent on the mixing side
< . < > . > or mabey a little less XD

[bigBerd]

I have but one thing to say about this track. Upload it to Soundcloud or somewhere I can download it.