<WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

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<WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 19 Dec 2012 14:37

Just something me and my little sister are making together.

Sounds shitty because unmastered. and I also suck, so there's that.

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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby randomblockfilms » 19 Dec 2012 17:38

ok ok don't be offended but for the first half of this song i was like
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but then

at 2:30

i wuz like

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ok so you say its shitty because unmastered. well ok if you think that way. i kinda agree (but thats just because you simply need to master it. no biggie) but MAN THAT SYNTH!!! BRO COMEONE!!! that sounds so AWESOME!!!! i was totally not expecting that. Blown away might be another term to describe what i am feeling now.

my only advice its to make more music with that synth as it sounds quite badass.


now for the beginning of the song, i think the vocals are a bit out of tune. not all of them, just the one in the back ground with the lower pitch. and the little synth moving around at 1:36 sounds a bit silly. but that just might be me.

hope you accept this feedback into your workflow. :D (if that makes any sense)
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 19 Dec 2012 18:42

randomblockfilms wrote:ok ok don't be offended but for the first half of this song i was like
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but then

at 2:30

i wuz like

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ok so you say its shitty because unmastered. well ok if you think that way. i kinda agree (but thats just because you simply need to master it. no biggie) but MAN THAT SYNTH!!! BRO COMEONE!!! that sounds so AWESOME!!!! i was totally not expecting that. Blown away might be another term to describe what i am feeling now.

my only advice its to make more music with that synth as it sounds quite badass.


now for the beginning of the song, i think the vocals are a bit out of tune. not all of them, just the one in the back ground with the lower pitch. and the little synth moving around at 1:36 sounds a bit silly. but that just might be me.

hope you accept this feedback into your workflow. :D (if that makes any sense)



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the beginning.... YOU MOTHER FUCKER I'LL MURDER YOUR FAMILY!!!!!!

Haha no it's okay, that's the feeling I want from it, and either way I haven't put in any vocal's other than "Chop Chop Dashie" and the opening, which crackle's when the bigger synth come's in, I also originally had a different punch drop to use at the beginning, and the synth is... bigger now.
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 19 Dec 2012 18:44

oh and 1:36 synth is gone, I actually just forgot about it haha
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby randomblockfilms » 19 Dec 2012 21:55

Nonsense_Profile wrote:

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the beginning.... YOU MOTHER FUCKER I'LL MURDER YOUR FAMILY!!!!!!



glad you took that nicely :D i was worried you was gonna git mad. i can be very mean sometimes! :O! eheeheee

but yeah i like the song but it just needs some fine tuning, but you are aware of that so i thinks its all good in da hood. yayyyy!
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby itroitnyah » 20 Dec 2012 12:08

So where did the kick and snare go at the drop?

hint hint hint

Very good, otherwise
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 20 Dec 2012 14:43

itroitnyah wrote:So where did the kick and snare go at the drop?

hint hint hint

Very good, otherwise


Drowned out by the growl =[ the song your hearing isn't even at full volume, I heard to lower it like 5 decibels.

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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby MRPPony » 21 Dec 2012 12:31

Omg dat drop. THAT DROP! Omg that's just amazing and I love the glitchy vocals you've pretty much plastered the entire track with.
My only suggestion is for the intro, keep the kick/snare out for the first 16 measures. It just feels a bit weird cause it sounds like its building up to something.
1:37 ~ 2:02 feels unnecessary for the same reason unless you wanted the inception bit there (A buildup to another buildup that's a buildup for the buildup). It sounds great but that uplifting FX gives it that inception bit.
Besides that, brohoof to you and your sister. This sounds great so far. I normally don't like the deep ass slowdown vocals you threw in at 3:26 but after that drop...that AMAZING drop, it just feels right! Its like it's trying its best to recover.
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Re: <WIP><Remix> Winter Wrap Up Dubstep - RIDIUM

Postby Nonsense_Profile » 21 Dec 2012 19:25

Mastering blahhhhhh
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